No-Need-for-Bushido's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Pencil Indecent]

so I was won over before play

That preloader was just too fun. I mean, I liked the flash... but I'm going to go back to the preloader now.

Sound lag was the only problem I saw... Is the audio set to stream? Anyway, good job.

magumbo responds:

no i was sure to set it all to start. Idk what was wrong with it. glad you liked the preloader

[Pepsi Commercial]

Good job

Very well done. I think the style is very suitable for the Pepsi brand name and should appeal to a young target audience. I think the music for a final version would have to be better, but I'm sure the final commercial would be able to use some top notch music.

The slogan itself is not the best I've heard. It runs circles around such gems as "Have you had your break today." or "Coke brings your dead relatives back to life." (the direct translation of one of Coke's old slogans into Japanese)

However, the idea that the can you are drinking from was once someone else's does not make me feel like going out and buying a Pepsi. If it were recycled into something else I would think "hey, this is environmentally friendly AND sanitary." Granted that would render your slogan null and void.

I think you should make a few more of these, keeping the style, but perhaps trying different slogans and ideas. Perhaps if you made it obvious that the recycled can was going back to the same guy, it wouldn't seem so weird... or maybe I'm just being picky. I know recycling does not transfer any disease or anything from use to use (heck, water in your sink used to be in a toilet,) but it is not something I would want to associate with a product.

Anyway, good job.

AlmightyHans responds:

haha youve got a great point!

[God's Message]

Great message, questionable opening

While I appreciate the basis of the flash, and enjoyed the basic joke, the biblical quotes are not exactly fitting with the tone of the rest of the flash. To some they might be off-putting, particularly a passage that ductates the actions of those in disagreement as based on a personal desire to hide the truth.
I would reccomend a less heavy handed loader for this flash.
It would fit in better with a more serious flash dealing more directly with the passage you selected.
-Joe
I would like to see more, though :)

Godlimations responds:

you know what, you are right.